Toefl TWE exercise, 88

There
are so many arguments that communication between people have become
less personal with developing telephones and e-mail. Some people
agree with the statement. However, it does not convince me because of
the following reasons, broaden relationship and personalized tools.

First
of all, we can find that with the development of telecommunication
technics, relationship between people is becoming larger and
stickier. For example, when there were not telephones, people should
use letter on paper or person in order to communicate to some other
person in distant location. However, in modern times after creation
of telephone, we could easily talk to our friends by using mobile
phone whenever and wherever we want. From technical development,
personal communication would be stronger.

Secondly,
personalized tools to comminucate between people would help the
communication more personl. For example, electronic mail requires
password to access to the main text. E-mail is not only one of the
useful tools to send messages but also one of the secretized tools to
hide them. Also, it is the proved fact that mobile phone with CDMA
technology cannot be hacked by a malicious user. These tools support
highly personalized communication. It could not be imagined without
telephones or e-mail.

In
conclusion, since they support people to communicate between members
in personal relationships, telephone and e-mail sufficiently make it
more personal. Therefore, I do not agree the statement to be
mentioned above.