Toefl TWE exercise (26)

I
totally support the plan that builds a new movie theatre in my
neighborhood. This is because the following two reasons, more
possibility for watching movies and more growth of local economy.

First
of all, my friends as well as I like to watch movies. The news about
building a new theatre makes the friends and me more friendly because
it provides more chances to meet each other and to get the same
experiences. In my opinion, this is the fact that would be applied
not only to my friends but also members of the local community.
Moreover, fortified friendship between members of the community could
help them feel so happy in their everyday life. Therefore I strongly
support the plan to build it.

Secondly,
the new movie theatre can help the local economy grown because it
leads to the result that new economic area is composed in order to
sell the goods and foods to the customers of the theatre. Moreover,
invisible economic effects might be more than visible ones. For
example, people to want to watch the movie should use transportations
which use gasoline or other kinds of fuel. This makes indirect
economic effects which help labors in gas station. This is why I
agree the plan.

From
the reasons that I mentioned above, I advocate the plan to build a
new movie theatre. It can make me, my friends, and my neighborhood in
local community happier and richer.