그리고 퇴근 직전에 소장님 비서실에서 전화가 와서 선물 받아가라고…-_-;

뭔 선물인가 받아서 뜯어봤더니 4GB 용량의 카드형 USB드라이브였다. 안그래도 USB드라이브는 남아돌고 있어서, 내 장난감 컴퓨터에게 주었다. (내 장난감 컴퓨터는 Compact Flash와 USB드라이브를 하드디스크 대신 쓴다. 그래서 USB드라이브를 받으면 하드 용량이 늘어난다.)

정부가 돈이 많이 들어가는 공사를 발주한다. 따라서 일자리가 늘어나고 서민 경제가 활성화 될 것이다.

여기서 “따라서”가 맞으려면 서민에게 돈이 가야 한다. 그런데, 발주해서 돈을 주고나서 그 돈이 실제로 서민에게 가는지는 감독하지 않는다. “따라서” 서민에게 돈이 가지 않는다. 이것은 “자연스럽”고 또한 “당연”한 일이다.

There are many arguments if it is bad that children are allowed to watch television. In my opinion, I totally agree the argument that that is bad. This is because of three reasons; getting their eyes worse, making their brain hardened, and having their physical health weakened.

First of all, it is the well known fact that watching television makes human’s eyes worse. The effect is more powerful to children, so they may live with bad eyes in their whole life. Moreover, eyes that have been already bad could not be cured. Therefore, it is necessary to prohibit for children to watch television.

Second, television just provide so much information. Forced injection of information without consideration makes children’s brain thoughtless more and more. According to a research, the children that watch television from their early age have lower inteligence index than ones that do not. This is a good reason that children should be prevented to watch television.

At last, children to watch television do not tend to do physical excercises. If their parents help them get out and play on the ground, they never do not move their body and watch television on everyday. It is obvious that this leads them to become less healthy. Thus, their parents should not allow the children to watch television and let them play on out of the house.

In sum, television has three bad effects, which are for eyes, for brain, and for physical health. Therefore, I strongly argue that television should be turned off in sight of children since allowing chlidren to watch television must make bad effect to them.

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273단어.

점점 글이 짧아진다. 어떻게 이걸 두배로 늘리지…-_-;

그나저나 이건 독립형 지문이고, 통합형은 읽고 듣고 써야 하는데 어느세월에 어떻게 준비하지…

잠잠해지면 다시 풀겠습니다.

When we have free time, we can do something to develop ourselves. Moreover, people do not things that make their community improved because they are regarded as having no relation to themselves. However, because there are strong relationships between a person and the one’s community, it is so important to contribute the community. If provide my time to advance my community, I want to clean the street in my town. This is because there are three reasons: meeting members in the community, making the town more comfortable, and helping the local economy to progress.

First of all, cleaning the street provides more chances to meet my neighbors and people in my town. The increased chances to meet each other also help crime rate decreasing since people in the town trust each other and they easily can notice strangers who might do possibly crime.

Second, making the town more comfortable will be also helped by cleaning the street. In my personal experience, I had wiped out heavy snow on the road from my home to a bus-stop. After this, my neighbors as well as I were able to go to my working site. If we just waited for snow to melt down, we must be fired by our bosses.

At last, cleaning the street helps the local economy because the management budget of the town could be saved. Assume that all of us do clean our street volutarily. Then, it leads the budget to clean the street to save. We can easily find examples like this to save the budget.

All in all, I will clean my street if I give my hour to my town. This is because I believe that it is the only way to using my time worthly.

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확실히 애드립으로 쓰려고 하니 글빨이 딸린다. 이 글의 2배 정도 되는 길이로 써야 좋은 점수가 기대되는데 -_-;

과연 이번엔 “업그레이드”를 할 수 있을까?

나는 지금까지 한번도, 그 어떤 배포판도 업그레이드에 성공한 적이 없었다. 매번 새 버전이 출시되면 항상 CD를 구워서 포맷을 해야만 했는데, 이번엔 좀 기대된다.

날려먹어도 웹 접속할 장난감 컴퓨터 하나는 더 있으니 일단 고고씽.

추가 : 성공했다 ㅋㅋ